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Life is over nothing to live for.
Every time I try to fight back
Life will push you to the floor.
Life is there ready to attack,
leaving me with nothing to do
with nothing to say,
with nothing to pursue,
everything around me is in disarray everyday.

Life is overwhelmingly vicious
Life will steal my heart,
all my ambitions
and rip them apart.
I am left here wondering why;
why Life wouldn't let me be the guy?
why Life allowed her to lie?
why I can't do anything but lay here and cry?

Life has a mischievous cloak
Life just waits in the background
ready to play its practical joke.
Then finally when no one is around,
Life will just throw its cloak over me
and all I will see is black.
When the cloak comes off my world is a pile of debris.
All I want to do is turn back,
Life wont allow it.
I am ready to slit,
Life wont allow it.
Life wont allow me to quit.
Life forces me to keep fighting even though there is no hope
I start to fight and push my way up this steep slope
knowing that there is no use.
I keep sliding down blistered and bruised,
but I am  undeterred.
I have no idea what has occurred,
but I keep pressing on.
I will give until everything is gone.
I won't quit!
I can't quit!
No matter how hard I try to forget
I can't forget that Angel I met.

Why does Life put an Angel in front of me then take her away
Why can't Life just allow her to stay.
She was the best thing i ever had and Life took her from me
But I will continue to fight to find that key
that will bring that Angel back to me
The angel I look for,
the Angel I adore,
the Angel I love.
©2007-2009 ~mltryfireman
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Author's Comments

I was in a weird mood. I started off mad and somehow I couldnt stop thinking about someone and it kinda ended in a love poem very weird tell me what you think.

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:iconmltryfireman:
by the way in case anyone was wondering I am not suicidal

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No one ever drowned in sweat.
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Nice deviation :D :spammer:

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this didnt end anything like i thought it would

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No one ever drowned in sweat.

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