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Having to break up with my one true love
is the worst pain I could ever speak of.
To know that we would no longer be one,
that everything I worked hard for would be done.

Just to make you happy I had to tell you it was finished.
Knowing that my love for you would never diminish
just broke my heart and ripped the tears out of my eyes.
I couldn't help but to break down and cry.

Waiting here to see what will come
just puts me in a complete slum.
I cant stand this pain that I feel
but some how I will find a way to continue still.

Now all I can do is hope for the best.
and to hope that we wont end up like the rest.
I need to give you your space and time
and hope one day you will want to be mine.
©2007-2009 ~mltryfireman
:iconmltryfireman:

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A poem i wrote about my life

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:iconescapinghope:
a very good poem!
its so hard to get over someone you loved so much... i feel this exact same way
take a look at mine if u ever have the time ^ ^

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Forever Tied To Apathy, Forever Engaged With Tradgedy
:iconannafisha:
I know the feeling and it's the pain is unbearable..I only broke up for 1 day and I can feel the knife was slicing my heart non-stop and luckily it's only for one day and I cannot imagine if it's forever..well I had never experienced the break up thing except for that one day..n ur poem is very good..keep up the good work ;D

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Poetry is a journey of emotions..For they are sailed in the ocean of words..

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